Monday, August 22, 2005

in honor of bukowski and yuri (style-wise)

going away to college


my mother kissed me on the cheek
put her arms around me
and said,
"it's your last night sleeping
in your room...
but you'll be back"

a lump formed in my throat

will i be back?

yes, in two weeks
to go to Texas
for my cousin's Bat Mitzvah

surly, sometime then
i will cuddle up under the warm covers
of my comfortable
safe bed
and sleep again
in my room.

6 Comments:

At 10:49 PM, Blogger Jodi said...

i love your bed! tonight was beautiful. i love you.

 
At 2:37 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Can home be mobile? Can it be a place simply defined as where you are?

 
At 2:01 PM, Blogger Rachael said...

well i'd say yes and no. yes in the sense that your home travels as far as you allow your heart to go. no in the sense that the place you grew up in will always bring a nostalgic love and emotion to your heart when you're there.

when do you go to school, tim? (i'm at towson)

 
At 12:47 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I move in Saturday.

I confess Rachael, I'm not sure if this is a poem or not...if it is, then I shouldn't have commented (I have a strict no-comments-on-Rachael's-free-verse-stuff policy), but oh well.

I suspect you built highschool up as a very...important thing. That is to say, you grasped onto the experiences and people as if they were the very essence of life itself, something irreplacable.

 
At 2:14 PM, Blogger Rachael said...

well i wouldn't consider it a poem.. haha.. i was kind of mocking yuri/bukowski. (eh, its a long story).. but it's not really that i built it up.. it's that i really did just have a whole lot of meaningful/important experiences. not that i won't have them in college.. i'm sure i'll have more. it's just, it all meant a lot. yes.

good luck with umbc.

 
At 12:43 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

today's message of "I LOVE RACHAEL!" college is good. my internet is down so i'm in my neighbors room and they're cool. youuu rock rach.

-jo

 

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